Redemption is a manga idea of mine I like drawing but know im not good enough to start making a manga. Just wanted some opinions, ways to improve, etc and since the majority of my friends are cruel thought id upload them on here :)
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    You've got drawing potential, man. You've got the skill, just need to practice your technique a bit.

    • Ertrov
    • January 13, 2012, 10:41 pm
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    My opinion? pretty good picture. I would say even if you think your not good enough to draw it yet I say go for it. Think of it like a rough draft in a sense. Then when you do get better you can go back and improve the drawing and story. I enjoy amateur manga personally and even if its not the best, I commemorate the author for the hard work they put into it and just for trying.
    I am interested in the story of your manga (:

    Thanks, i may just do that. :)
    - RhysThatIsAll January 13, 2012, 11:41 am
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    Just start drawing it! The only way to learn it is to try it. The picture looks a bit rough round the edges of the coat and you need some practise at drawing cloth, good start though

    • suckots
    • January 13, 2012, 11:46 am
    Thanks, I agree. :D
    - RhysThatIsAll January 13, 2012, 11:50 am
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    So so so. Here's the deal that I see, I see something good, and an idea you have. If you're afraid of going to publication or so on, start a web comic, invite the sharenators and everyone you know. As you keep going, you get better, and you keep people entertained. Either you spawn a massively awesome web comic and someone picks you up for an actual novel series, or you have an awesome web comic and can still be proud yes? Yes. I say so. I have seen many people do this, Charby the Vampirate is one of my favorite web comics and over the years she has gotten so awesome at drawing. She started out just doodling silly things, and eventually it grew into the overly awesome thing it is now. So, that's my idea. Don't hold back, just change directions. :)

    Looks good to me. I totally agree with loki, a web comic is a perfect way to start out. You build a following and hone your craft at the same time ;)
    - tempfaux January 13, 2012, 9:20 pm
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    This is dreadful, why are you so bad at drawing Rhys?!
    rhysdrawing - redemption

    This is exactly what i meant... Also that is a small black dot that i found insignificant so did not see the reason to get rid of.
    - RhysThatIsAll January 13, 2012, 10:59 am
    Well that small black dot has made the whole picture terrible.
    - DarkHunter January 13, 2012, 11:03 am
    ...thanks for the feedback.
    - RhysThatIsAll January 13, 2012, 11:12 am
    You're welcome!
    - DarkHunter January 13, 2012, 11:14 am
    So apparantly noone got what I was doing here and thought I was serious. "since the majority of my friends are cruel" I was directly referring to this as a joke you utter morons as I know him from college.
    - DarkHunter January 13, 2012, 6:05 pm
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