My Poetry: For My Erato (Godess)

Now I know, that I'm not the best for you
No, but I got the best of you stuck up in my head like every night
Sleep tight to the thought that my body can rest on you
Never act like I'm professional
Loving you is hard but I've got the strength to pull forward
With a lot of respect for you, though either way I gotta be next to you
Need lovin? Ima rock the bed for you
Take it the top, I will hop the fence for you
No lie give you whatever you need
Ima ride for you, grind for you, die protecting you
Giving you no false allegeable, no playing with you, I'll present the truth
One day you will be mine, Ima take time with it
Feel it out, lost my breathe for you

Should be cryin' but I just can't let it show
Should be hopin' but I can't stop
Thinkin' thinkin' about you

I feel obsession, cause I just want you
And I know that I never wanted to love you, but I do
And it's new to you and me both
I swear I never planned it, I usually do
But it's like you and I just clicked
Whether you refuse to comply, I did
And it feels so right that I don't mind one-siding my love
By the time I split, you'll get it
Maybe you will love me too
Maybe that mud you drug me through will prove it
That I won't go nowhere, can't think of anyone above you boo
You know that you get me crazy, I'm feeling it so much lately
You better know this is all for you, any setback will not phase me
Better believe I don't wanna leave you, please I don't want regrets
All I want is one chance to seriously see what it would've been like

  • DJ9090
  • November 20, 2012, 4:07 pm
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    i love it :')
    if this is for real.. then she's a lucky lady
    and it takes guts to show such words and poetry..
    i dun think i'd ever share anything i wrote when i was your age XD i never did
    impressive hun.. keep it up

    I didnt think i was that young, but then again I'm only 17 at the moment (18 soon) and I don't find to many problems with sharing stuff on Sharenator :P more to come trust me.
    - DJ9090 November 26, 2012, 10:25 am
    i'm 23 -_- so to me.. when i remember being 17.. i feel it was like ages ago XD
    keep them coming ;)
    - MissRandom November 27, 2012, 12:30 am
    well MissRandom, i will keep them coming when i find the time, with moving out to be on my own I dont have all the time in the world, but the neighbors have free wifi! so that is a plus.
    - DJ9090 November 27, 2012, 8:49 am
    LOL.. you're a bad person XD
    well.. good luck with everything hun :)
    - MissRandom November 28, 2012, 12:31 am
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    rhyming 'you' with 'you' over and over again is cheating a bit

    Well it starts out as just a free verse. No rhyming involved. But then I try to add rhymes with keeping to the original meaning. It’s more therapeutic then trying to be clever.
    - DJ9090 November 27, 2012, 8:46 am
    Sounds like a song.
    Nice poetry.

    Here's one:
    I see you drivin
    'round town with the girl I love
    and I'm like, haiku.
    - Wispy November 28, 2012, 12:43 am
    +1 for you my good sir
    - DJ9090 November 28, 2012, 8:48 am
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    It's not bad. If you wrote this specifically for a girl it doesn't matter how bad it is though she'll eat it up. However, some parts seem to be completely over the top like "Ima ride for you, grind for you, die protecting you." This makes me wonder if you'd catch a grenade for her? Or jump in front of a train for her?

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