Art 2

ok so the quality of the pics doesn't really give them true justice but in any case here's my second art post.

Now I know that several people on here like anime so i gave some attempts at it myself. The way I figure it is that by doing these it will be a stepping stone to drawing real detailed people. one of them has a before and after shading effect on it so don't tell me I double posted. I did that on purpose. The fourth is one from last year which I thought turned out decently and the last is the first piece thats actually taking me over an hour to do. I'm putting a lot of time into it and it isn't any where near where I want it to be but I would like some feed back on it. any advice will be taken with extreme amounts of appreciation. I'll post that one again when it's completed. If you guys have any requests I'll do my best to put them in the next post.

photo on 2011 06 20 at 21 00 2 - art 2

photo on 2011 06 20 at 20 59 3 - art 2

photo on 2011 06 20 at 20 59 - art 2

photo on 2011 06 21 at 15 08 - art 2

photo on 2011 07 17 at 16 56 - art 2

photo on 2011 07 17 at 16 39 - art 2

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  • 2

    These are awesome.. I love the last one. That's gonna look awesome when done!

    • SuDoku
    • July 17, 2011, 11:44 am
  • 2

    Leonardo DaVinci the second :O

    • Disco
    • July 17, 2011, 12:25 pm
    lol thanks i like the forth and last best but i think the old man turned out well
    - 24paperwings July 17, 2011, 12:33 pm
  • 2

    nice! there very awesome

  • 2

    I like the last one most, you do landscapes very well.
    You seem to be getting better so keep at it!

  • 2

    The last one is definitively best

  • 2

    Go to Japan bro, lot of art studio's will take you in for free if you work there part time. I did that at Kodakawa (Tokyo) on and off for 2 years while I was stationed in Japan (US Navy) knowing the language helps but most of them speak passable English and find it a TRIP that you as an American Anime enthusiast wants to learn the ropes (at least they did in 03-05).

    Wait is this actually true? what do you mean by take me in for free? like they will have me work there free as in an internship? or live there free of charge?
    - 24paperwings July 20, 2011, 1:14 pm
    Yeah basically Internship, I got bought lunch and dinner all the time, and never paid for drinks, but yeah it was basically internship I was in the Navy over there so I worked in Yokosuka and went over there on Days off. (maybe 10-12 days a month.) Honestly I got in the same way I got into the Konami building and Capcoms HQ. I walked up and said I'm from america... I love your games...I wanna meet the people that made them.
    - brotroll1 July 20, 2011, 6:14 pm
  • 2

    these are awsome! id love too see more :D

  • 2

    ur getting better, i would love to how awesome u r in a year. keep up the good work

  • 2

    Check out this dudes channel
    also good job your already leagues ahead of anything I can draw.

  • 2

    Looks good, just might want to study body proportions a little more though. You've got good potential.

    • Ertrov
    • July 18, 2011, 5:01 pm
    just out of curiosity which ones do you think need the most work on the proportions? the first two i can see i need to work on but i can't really tell on the 4th one if i need to adjust the proportions.
    - 24paperwings July 18, 2011, 5:08 pm
    Fourth is the best, but the head needs to slope forward more. Our necks don't go straight up.

    (These are not my drawings, just some proportion drawings I found online)
    - Ertrov July 18, 2011, 5:11 pm
    perfect! thanks i always had trouble doing the transition between head to the body and couldn't quite figure out what was wrong. thats great advice
    - 24paperwings July 18, 2011, 5:15 pm
  • 1

    this is better than anything i can draw, nice pics paperwingz

  • -3

    I've done better.

    You know... He's looking for feedback, aka, constructive criticism. Don't be a douche.. IF you're so much better then him, why not give him advice and tips rather then make yourself look like a stuck up, arrogant prick.
    - SuDoku July 18, 2011, 2:47 am
  • -8

    I've taken craps that look better than that

    wtf? dude seriously. if you dont like it, give constructive critisism, not "You suck"...srsly, get a life.
    - Bored10123 July 17, 2011, 5:13 pm
    please if you feel you can do better why don't you show me? i would love to see a fellow artists works. post the very best drawing you can make and show everyone here that you sir are better than me at drawing. go on go ahead and show me up. in the mean time
    - 24paperwings July 17, 2011, 7:54 pm
    sounds like its someones time of the month
    - Goronix July 18, 2011, 4:52 pm
    sounds like someones a faggot troll who needs to keep his dumbass comments to himself
    - 24paperwings July 18, 2011, 5:00 pm
    calm down bro
    - Goronix July 18, 2011, 5:15 pm
    i'm perfectly calm cause your just trying to troll and i know that
    - 24paperwings July 18, 2011, 5:33 pm
    people throw around the word troll way to much on this site, just because you don't like my opinion doesn't make me a troll.
    - Goronix July 18, 2011, 6:41 pm
    no but being a douche about it in order to get me mad and get people to respond angrily (which is what you did) is trolling. i have no desire to get into arguments with people and very rarely do. so stop trying to turn this around and sound all offended because honestly i don't want to hear it. if you had any amount of common curtesy you would keep offensive statement such as the one you posted to yourself or at the very least post "you need some more work". treat others respectfully and you will receive the same treatment. in other words stop being a douche.
    - 24paperwings July 19, 2011, 2:09 am
    I've seen you post 'opinions' with no real relevance to the post before. You're a troll.

    Definition of Troll:


    People who post empty and meaningless messages, purely to provoke.
    Such people are mentally ill and have severe personality issues and insecurity as well as the average mind/priorities of a twelve year old.

    Some people just can't grow out of the period in their life when scribbling on the walls and dropping spiders on the girls they liked was acceptable. At 20-30yrs of age, it's just pathetic.

    Trolls don't care about proving a point or championing a cause. They just want to annoy, for the sake of annoyance and personal enjoyment, like a baby is entertained by a rattle or colorful lights.
    They may tack on a "point" to draw out specific types of people but, it really doesn't matter. They're all the same. They all say the same shit. They all have the same excuses. They all fall back on the same responses and, they all share the same obliviousness to how stupid and pointless their lives are.

    The troll is easily amused by things only the most retarded, unfunny child would appreciate.

    They celebrate getting a reaction, that's it. Generally, they are so desperate for human interaction and, they are usually so vile, that negative attention is the best they can get. The saddest thing is, anyone can get a reaction by acting like an idiot. Anyone. They honestly take pride in the "art" like they've actually accomplished something.

    It's astonishing to watch them brag about something 90% of the world would be embarrassed to even consider.

    Don't let the occasional "smart" troll fool you. There is no "art" to it. It's a self loathing tool with anonymity to shield him, doing stupid things and when someone tells them they're making an ass of themselves, they dance around like some great mastermind who manipulated the psyches of those around them through careful planning and psychology, when in reality, they're a retard who shit in the public fountain and laughed when everyone looked.

    Trolls have existed since ancient times, when they were referred to as the "village idiot" or "town drunk" a quixotic hero in their own mind, that the rest of the world pities in disgust.

    Said disgust, isn't a victory, trolls. You've lost. Pray you never realize it. Ignorance truly is bliss and, you're the happiest motherfuckers around. Go see a shrink and tell them that you find enjoyment in pissing people off and try to look surprised when they tell you, you've got serious mental problems.

    Troll this. *finger*
    - SuDoku July 19, 2011, 2:29 am
    paul or darius REALLY need to kick goronix off of sharenator, any comment i've seen him post is just insulting the post, on this post he called the drawings crap pretty much when they're not, and on my anime post he said anime is gay, and i cba remembering more examples XD but yeah, he needs to go.
    - Nightfang July 19, 2011, 12:59 pm
    i aint goin nowhere phaggot
    - Goronix July 19, 2011, 4:19 pm
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